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  • Delay for The Coming of the Dark King

    In answer to a question received recently by Email, I can confirm the delay to 'The Coming of the Dark King' is nearly at an end.
    TCODK has been split into to two volumes due to the number of pages and the size requested for the book. Book 1 cover has been officially approved and now it is at its final stage of publication.
    Thank you everyone who has commented on The Shipley Five. As a beginner author, I can honestly say, I have found the advice and guidance beneficial to where I wanted to be. Obviously, it takes time and dedication. There is still much to do, but my next project has instilled me with more confidence.

    Best Wishes

    A B Shires

  • Forbidden Love

    This poem was written with a taboo subject in mind. I am sure you will understand what that is, although, I assure you this was not intentional and by no means is it designed to offend. Consider it a mirror. Enough said.

    Forbidden Love
    by A.B.Shires

    I know of your secret, Nazreen
    Your lust for cream
    Your caution melting.
    You savour all has been.
    Gods in divinely orbit
    Inta, Mama Quilla and silent Earth.

    I know of your secret, Nazreen
    You know you are noticed
    You long to touch, to feel.
    Look in the mirror
    Moon shine. Old rivers rhyme.

    I know of your secret, Nazreen
    Your deepest dream
    Why you fly and how happy you are
    Grace discovered
    The virgin flower.

    I know of your secret, Nazreen
    What makes you shimmer?
    The veil is drawn, but betrayal has neared
    The depth of love, I feared.

    I know of your secret, Nazreen
    Your lust for Blue Eyes
    He lifts your heart. You live for him
    You’ll dance for him. You’ll sing for him.
    The quest to win.
    The path to sin.

    I know of your secret, Nazreen
    You know you are spoken
    And for knowing, I am broken
    O’ be still this heart, I don’t want to be mean
    They’ll mess with your mind and tear you apart
    Confide in me. I’ll keep it for free.

    I know of your secret Nazreen. I know you.
    Your spirit untamed, thrilling and bold
    To conform, you will not be told
    Be careful now, and live for peace?
    The wolves linger; servants to deny pleasure.
    Your secret is mine, my dearest treasure.

    Do it. But don’t do it, Nazreen,
    In the night your feet tread
    Be gone. Be free. Be loved.
    Swallows flight. Winters blight.
    For news cometh, I dread.

    All rights reserved, A B Shires
    'Verses from Britain' 2009

  • Dreamer

    Dreamer
    by A B Shires

    I’m a dreamer 9 to 5
    Whisk me up and set me down
    On the train and in my mind
    Dreaming big and dreaming change,
    spinning money to play the game.

    I’m a dreamer 9 to 5
    Whisk me up and set me down
    Recalling errors and set them right
    This weary job, this repetitive dance,
    a plan for new. A world to tame.
    Suppressing sigh, almost right.

    I’m a dreamer 9 to 5
    Whisk me up and set me down
    Leave this grey, and leave this town
    Nod your head to make them smile
    and pass the time.
    Give sound advice,
    the Great Big Sell.
    This wretched dance,
    the great big lie.
    I’m a winner. I’m on a high.

    I’m a dreamer 5 to 7,
    Whisk me up to set me down
    Flying high and landing slow
    Nervous ticker
    Inhaling deep for my soul to glow

    I’m a dreamer 7 to 10
    Pucker me up to make my move
    Pick my keys and shine my pen
    Kiss the girl to make her cry
    Flowers red, symbolic precious, words so true
    Speak them deep and speak them slow

    I’m a dreamer 10 to 9
    Whisk me up to set me down
    Pinch me, touch me, I love yous.
    Tears of joy and laughter blue
    A life ahead for me to prove.

    I’m a dreamer 9 to 5
    Whisk me up and set me down
    With pound and penny, it doesn’t matter
    I’m making changes. It’s good. It’s true.

    So if you’re a dreamer, just like me
    Speak them slow, and speak them deep
    Make your move and make it keep.

    Extract from Verses from Britain, A B Shires

  • The Dying Man, by A B Shires

    Hi all,

    This was written for someone special, as gentle as petal. Take no offence and draw what you need. It was written for all to read.

    The Dying Manby A.B.Shires

    I am withered beyond repair.

    How wretched is life that wilts no end? How wretched is the suffering, for the aches to bear, for the pains that cripple us, for patience to desert us? Or the endless supply of medication, so worthless. I waited for my comeuppance, on the bed of death that smelled of cleanliness, sweat and stale. The ceiling lights that mimic the day, the painted walls that have no say. The hospital ward like the dreaded alley of no return, bury and burn. I welcomed the infection that bred to pale.

    Oh, how they scurry to extend their compassion, coming quickly and leaving quicker, repeating their sympathy like it really mattered.

    I have lived and now live no more. Am I the one who could not sleep? With battery drips that continue their beep, I wait for Him, for the opening of his door. The clock ticks, the sun rises and settles, the moon without silver, the stars with no shimmer. This bed be made of nettles.

    Oh, how wretched is life that wilts no end!

    Take me God, take me please today. I care no more for doctors and nurses, or my relatives and friends who flex their purses. I care only for your deliverance, my heart weeps with repentance. Thy kingdom come, thy will be done. But then the sun rises and settles once more, the doctors tapping my veins some more. The man on the television spins his game, the endless channels to rise to fame.

    Give them their youth, give them their time. Give them their song with rhythm and rhyme. Let their joys speak to the nation, the continents, the heavens, the children of countless generations, buzzing with laughter, the world rushing faster, pushing me harder toward the Great Master. Be rid this life, I can bear no plaster. This is my last breath, this is my day. Oh God, do you not hear me pray? I have the temptation to do it myself, but the light I crave more with my face to the floor. It keeps me at your door.

    How wretched is life that wilts no end? I want to cry, I want to sleep.

    And then she came. So beautiful, light, graceful and tall, she called my name.

    “In the beginning,” she whispered “we were many and we were one. Will you have patience to hear my song?”

    “Are you an angel?” I inhaled, like a dumbstruck child. “Are you the beginning of my new life?”

    She smiled like the sun breaking a cloudy year. “I am the end of your beginning, and the step to your legacy. I am the song of youth, the path to choose, the bread to break, the wine to drink. I am all to think.”

    Excited, I laughed. “Will you take me into the light? Will you carry me to heaven? Did you hear my plight?”

    “Alas, I am no angel. But I am your salvation. I am your will, the end of kill, the lesson to drill with no chance to spill.”

    I stared bewildered. “Am I not withered?”

    She touched me, caressing my face, tilting her head, and I was surely awake. Surprised, I was on my own feet, the wires unattached and no wounds to bleed.

    “Today is not your day,” she said. “No more this bed, please don’t sigh. Today you are made well to stand and tell. With the blink of my eye, you will keep you head held high.”

    “I don’t want to. I have not the will.”

    “Oh, but you do.”

    But my eyes looked past her for the light, until she stepped again to draw my cry.

    “Let me die, give me peace to last. I ask of you, I beg of you. This life is grey.”

    “Oh my love, I know your bane. I know why you weep, and why you surrender.”

    “Why does it matter?”

    “I know of your lover, the betrayal cut deep, the pitiful life you lived as a whore. And for the son you have no more.”

    “Why does it matter?”

    “Hear me, hear my song. Embrace the words to warm your soul. You are relieved of your pain and sorrow.”

    “And what of the cost that I risk to borrow?”

    “In the beginning,” she whispered “we were many and we were one. We lived in peace. We could trace our clans to our fathers and mothers, our likeness to other sisters and brothers. We travelled the stars to seek and greet. All was well, no sound, no smell. We divided, we prospered, we made our beds.”

    “What relevance does this have for me?” I gasped.

    “Speak the question that has begun to fester.”

    “Is there God?” I asked, suppressing my fear. Her ambience and light prevented me near.

    She replied, “We like to believe. The truth is there, if you deny your sleep.”

    “Why me, if the world is at your feet? I am barren and snake, who has given no take. Surely there are those who have a better nose? The ones less needy, that give, give and sit pretty? Why does you waste your time, for I am like thorns that have wilted with sour rhyme?”

    Her voice, alluring, sang her song. “Oh, my dearest heart who has lost his soul. From where I stand, I know you more. You do stand pretty, your voice so poor. You have yet to dance. You have yet to brave and make a stand. Hear me, hear my song. Embrace the words, and warm your soul. They will need you, they will come. They will regret all that has been done.”

    I gave this thought, but I was not yet bought. “Will they really? Will they? Will they? Why save them? Why save me? Why do you even bother? Are we not entangled trouble?”

    She explained so sadly that it made me quiver.

    “In the beginning when all was well, a war broke out from words to brawn, from silt to girth, from heaven to hell. Lives were lost, worlds destroyed. Sins begotten, we are responsible for all be forgotten. Now we have found you, we will make amends.”

    “Is there no end?” I asked, stopping, eyeing her without my head dropping.

    She smiled and how it reached within me!

    “All ends mark a beginning, and all beginnings mark an end. Don’t hurt your head, smile instead. We are the best that has ever been. No errors in judgment since the unforgotten beyond. Our universe; our pond. We are the eternal hope to children of tomorrow, regardless of race, creed, habitat and sorrow. Take my hand and walk your path. I know of your despair, and how you suppress your wrath. Speak to me now, for I will be your mother, your brother, your wife and your lover. I am the beginning of all that is other.”

    “Who do we save?” I said aghast with a task so vast. “Do we save the cruel, the greedy, or the ones who drool? Do we save the rich, the poor, or the ones who have some more? Do we save the white man with his arrogant wife, the one who believes his superior life? Do we save the one who carries? Do we save the bloodthirsty wicked, who plan and plot, to spread their suffering for all to rot? Or do we save the innocent who are few and far between, and even the young live their lives so mean?”

    “In the beginning,” she said “we were many. Over the great divide, we saved ourselves by spreading wide. All your pains are now in the past. Believe. Believe again. Believe for all. Believe for the past, and believe for tomorrow. Believe for salvation. Believe for the learning. Believe for the present, and to prolong the yearning. We are the best for all that has been, and we share our youth for all to see.”

    “But I am blind, and I cannot hear,” I said, filled with anguish and tears. I voiced my fears. “Search the world and you will not find. There is no one that comes to mind. There have been, but they were stoned. There were comforters and they were gone, rags to rags, rags to riches, stripped to bone to please the spiritual witches. They were robbed for all they were worth, and more of what they earned. Take your mirth, your hope, to those worthy of birth. You will find not on Earth. I do not wish to disappoint, or give false hope. Do you even see the point to cope?”

    “In the beginning,” she said, drawing near with her voice so deep, her eyes so steep. “We were many. We learned our ways, our arts of old, our arts of new, we lost so few and conquered our knowledge. We have felt all that is despair, but know now that this journey of yours you have to travel. We are your saviours, we are your kin. We are here to ensure you deliver.”

    “But I am one to dither,” I protested.

    “That is you of the shallow, but not you who is tested.”

    “Are you sure? Are you certain?”

    “An angel without a purpose? I am one to heal, and you are the one to feel.”

    Intrigued, I took her hand. “Is it science? How far did we come?”

    “Am I not here?” she asked, her eyes glistening and with her heart stopping tone. “For our will be done?”

    We began walking toward the light. She showed me all there was to see. From the heavens above and the ground to weep, I saw humanity with all its glory, so wretched and steep.

    Hail for hail Marys, hail for hails cheap. Hail for cheers from our hypocritical peers. Hail for the end to the hatred that runs so deep. Hail for the gods, hail for one God, hail for the end to the rabid race of dogs. Hail for our leap. Hail for the morning, hail for our keep.

    I am the one who could not sleep.

    And true to her word, the weeks were thinned. The sky rained fire, the ground trembled and the seas peaked. I was let loose to New London City where they came in their numbers, with anguish and tears, clasping the last of their belongings with suspicions and fears.
    Standing on the wall, I came to preach. My voice rang high, wide and deep.

    “I am the end of your beginning. I am the song of youth, the path to choose, the bread to break, and the wine to drink. I am all to think. Hear me people, hear my song. ‘In the beginning’ she whispered, ‘we were many and we were one. Will you have patience to hear my song?’”

    A B Shires
    The Shipley Five Books
    www.theshipleyfive.com

  • Free games to play on The Shipley Five Website

    Hi all,

    Have you visited The Shipley Five website recently? There are now free games to play, courtesy of free online games.com. You may even recognise some of them from the old arcades -wow, now wasn't that a golden age? Okay, an age of Thatcherite Britain, with grey suits, weird hair do's and men with make up on, maybe not your x-box world, but still, a happier and simpler Britain, perhaps?

    Better songs, even? Ha Ha!

    I'm sure you don't all agree. Too right. Each to his, or her own taste, I say.

    Anyway, feel free to spend your free time playing the long list of games. Pass it on to those you know.

    Best Wishes,

    A B Shires
    http://www.theshipleyfive.com/

  • Ever had one of those funny moments when you do something stupid, and people laugh?

    This morning, my wife was getting ready to go to an all-woman pre-pre-wedding party (they have so many and no, not a hen-do), so I hurried to the kitchen to ensure breakfast was ready on time, since the clocks had gone forward overnight and everyone seemed to know this except me. In my over-zealous and naiive wisdom, I prepared toast and boiled eggs, thinking it was quicker, and the kids would sit around the breakfast bar and eat it happily. The oldest took one look at it, before sidling to the cereal cupboard. The second protested outright, and the third said the eggs were too hot.

    An hour later, I managed to coax them to eat one egg each, so they wouldn’t be wasted. I hate food going to waste, so the promise of extra playtime, and cheeseburgers for lunch was accepted.

    “The eggs are cold,” the eldest said to me, entering the lounge.

    This was yet another statement which I was determined would not jeopardize our verbal treaty.

    “The kettle’s boiled. It will only take a minute to warm them up,” I told him.

    “Adam’s put his in the microwave.”

    “He’s done what?” My wife spun round, hair straightener in one hand, while utter horror expressed on her face.

    I rushed to the kitchen, wife and son in tow. The egg was rotating, half shelled and in an egg cup. I almost sighed with relief.

    “Adam, you don’t put eggs in the microwave!” I scolded, pulling my son away. I turned off the power, and opened the microwave to remove it.

    “Why?”

    The egg exploded. Luckily, no one else was anywhere near, but the kitchen was obscured by the egg pieces on my glasses.

    “That’s why,” said his mother. She shot a sympathetic look.

    The children thought it was funny.

    I was just glad it was me.

    Note: The editing has been done according to American idiom. The following is the final extract from ‘The Coming of the Dark King’. It follows the theme of today’s title entry.

    “Come IN!” I shouted deeply, leaping off the bed. I stood tall as the Great Red Queen. My eyes heated when I faced the commander, who entered and bowed respectfully.

    “The Jades and Lady Aifa are ready to depart, My Queen.”

    I looked at my friends, who readied themselves for departure. My heart sank, causing me to sigh.

    “Not without dinner. Order the food into the hallway and prepare the seating arrangements. Let them know that our guests will join them shortly.”

    “Yes, My Queen. Will there be anything else?”

    “Ensure that enough mithrin are saddled for their departure,” said Ithrandir, walking towards him.

    “We have provided two,” replied the commander.

    “Two will not suffice,” said Ithrandir, taking him into hallway. “Prepare a carriage and double the mithrin for their journey. These are troubled times. How many . . . ”

    His voice trailed off when they moved away from the royal chambers, down the long corridor towards the Royal Dome.

    “It makes you wonder, doesn’t it?” said Asif, watching the doors close.

    “What?”

    “Well, we’re at the other side of the universe and here you are with a soft bed, which could easily have been mistaken for one on Earth, even if it is very grand. Not exactly alien, is it? Their facilities are not that different to ours.”

    “Asif, have you forgotten? They live on Earth as well,” Muneeb said, turning around.

    “Have you seen them?” I asked, but Muneeb had walked away. His attention was on the artifacts on display.

    Arusa came closer.

    “One,” she said.

    We sat down on the bed and started talking. Asif disappeared through the door.

    It was at this time that Matthew did something imprudent.

    “What’s that?” asked Muneeb, nodding towards the vessel in Matthew’s hand.

    “I think its Krill juice. I sniffed the other one. It was fruity.”

    Matthew pulled off the cork and a wisp of steam drifted upwards. He smelled it, but hardly any odor could be detected. He took a tiny sip, tasting the foul fruitiness before his tongue began to feel the cold sensation.

    “What is it?” asked Muneeb, paying full attention to the drink in Matthew’s hand.

    Matthew clicked his tongue several times, before saying, “I think it is Bimi.”

    “Oh wow,” grinned Muneeb excitedly. “I bet you can’t drink a full glass.”

    “Oh yeah?” he glanced towards the table, spotting a small tumbler which he picked up in his hand. “How much do you want to bet?”

    Muneeb’s expression changed. He looked at him flatly.

    “Matthew, Bimi is dangerous for us. Have you forgotten what happened last time?”

    An image of Muneeb as he turned blue, shivering uncontrollably, came to mind.

    Matthew laughed

    “That was you, and I ain’t you. I bet you I can drink this glass full. What’s it worth?”

    Muneeb was intrigued.

    “I haven’t got any money, but you can have my next cheeseburger.”

    Matthew sighed.

    “I’m not gonna’ take your food, Muneeb,” he groaned. “What about doing something? What about doing errands for me for a day?”

    Muneeb thought about this, believing there was a trick that Matthew was not revealing. Then he remembered the effect it had on him last time, the cold spasms that overtook his body were not mild, and caused great alarm. There was nothing unreal about it.

    “A full glass of Bimi?” he said, puzzled.

    “A full glass of Bimi!” repeated Matthew, coolly.

    “Okay! But you have to finish it all, or the deal is off. And, if you’re ill, I’m not to blame!”

    “It’s a deal,” smiled Matthew shrewdly. They shook hands quickly.

    Matthew opened the cork, filling the glass with a luminous green liquid. The liquid seemed a little more watery than last time, but that didn’t deter him. Remembering that Muneeb became ill after he drank in quick succession, he took small mouthfuls, and rested between each one. The drink was fruity at first, but left a foul aftertaste. His mouth became dry and cold at the same time. Swallowing over a third of the content, he started wheezing and shivering. This should have been a clear indication for him to stop, but Matthew was determined in his conquest. His hands and knees trembled, but he steadied himself, urging himself on. The glass was more than half full. He took another sip, and shook with the rigor.

    “Forget it!”

    Muneeb’s cry came to my attention, he looked very concerned. I glanced at Matthew who was struggling to down the rest of the contents. He was shaking, his teeth were chattering and he looked giddy

    “Matthew, what are you doing?” I asked sternly.

    Matthew downed the rest of the contents as fast as he could.

    “He’s drinking Bimi,” said Muneeb. “I told him not to!”

    “Bimi? Whaddya mean, Bimi?” I said, baffled, “I don’t have any Bimi. Those are anesthetic jars for injuries!”

    Matthew spluttered the contents, coughing and wheezing.

    Muneeb laughed.

    I quickly crossed the room, taking the vessel from his hand, and noting the inscription engraved on the neck of the vessel.

    “This is Jarrph, you dork!” I scolded.

    Muneeb lost it. He bent sideways from laughter. Jarrph was known to be made of rotting berries and mithrin waste!

    “It isn’t, is it?” sniggered Arusa.

    She took the vessel from my hand, and burst into a fit of giggles, shielding her mouth with her hand as she wheezed uncontrollably. Then I saw the funny side too, sniggering out of disbelief.

    “It’s made from mithrin wee, you numpty!”

    This only increased their laughter. Muneeb fell on the floor.

    Matthew didn’t see the funny side at all. He was feeling very nauseous, and got up to vomit into a bucket near the wall.

    We were still choking with laughter, just watching him, when Asif arrived, holding a Food Tree in his hand.

    “What’s going on?” he said with a bemused smile.

    “Matthew,” tittered Arusa, “just drank a glass of Jarrph, thinking it was Bimi!”

    Asif sniggered. “He didn’t, did he?”

    He glanced at Matthew who was retching into the bucket. “You plonker!” he said, laughing.

    Matthew felt terrible. He fell to his knees. The spasms in his stomach slowed when he vomited, but he became very cold, and shivered.

    He looked off color when he rested against a pillar.

    I stopped laughing. It suddenly occurred to me that I did not have a clue about the effects Jarrph on a human if ingested.

    Arusa’s laughter subsided.

    “Are you alright, Matthew?”

    Matthew’s eyes closed briefly.

    Sensing something was wrong, she spoke with a serious tone: “Lisa, have you got any Rhiyssa?”

  • Another Preview for The Coming of the Dark King

    Hi all,

    Today something weird happened. I was walking back from Asda when I saw my 'old' teacher dressed in a pink mini-skirt and pink leather jacket walking toward me. Now, don't get me wrong, 30 years ago she would have been the bomb. She was the bomb, I clearly remember it.
    But the sight of her all wrinkly, saggy, camouflaged in pink with 'what the hell is on her face', I had to make a hasty detour. I was praying that she didn’t recognize me. Reaching the other side of the busy road, I sighed with relief, almost laughing, but when I saw where my son was standing and who he was talking to, my heart skipped a beat. Damn! He was laughing. She was laughing. The girl and boy with her were laughing. Queen of the damned, what spell had she cussed? What the hell were they talking about? And they were there a while. Should I dare venture forth to rescue him? No! My God, no! Oh hell, she would eat me alive! Thank God for the bush protecting me.

    I couldn’t believe my predicament, but I stayed as overseer, protector, telling myself anything untoward and I would run to save him. To hell with the busy traffic and her ungodly taste. Then something extraordinary happened, they moved nearer to the kerb and started looking both ways. I thought she would dare do it, but why? Had my son blabbed where we lived? Oh perish the nightmare. I found myself moving briskly to cross the road, weaving between the big bus and the truck to get to her, all the while keeping my smiling face on them. Lord have mercy.

    Her eyes lit up when she saw me. My eyes skimmed over the saggy flop under her knees. Don’t even ask what was above.

    “Don’t you recognize me?” she said, after rambling a sentence in her high pitched voice.

    I feigned intrigue, suppressing my desire to vomit. “No,” I lied, swallowing.

    The wind blew hard, pressing against all her blessed features. She made the effort to reminisce, and all the while I was thinking about how my pleasant memories would never be the same again.

    “I only live across the road,” I found myself saying. “It’s cold out here. Do you want to come inside for a cuppa?” Own goal! I was calm and smiling, but inside I was on the verge of Defcon 2.

    “Is that so? It’s a nice area, but no, we’ve got a busy afternoon ahead of us,” she said, smiling.

    “Are you sure?” I said, feigning disappointment.

    “Well, I suppose, we could spare ten minutes, couldn’t we Charlene?” She turned to her daughter, who started thinking this over.

    Defcon 1. Defcon 1. Defcon 1. Run for your life. Run for your life. Run for your life!

    “Mum, the shop will close. I need it for tomorrow,” she whined, finally.

    I held my breath.

    “Oh dear. It looks like I’m gonna’ have to give it a miss.”

    “It’s okay.”

    “Shame, I could’ve done with a cup of tea. I’m sorry.”

    “Don’t be.” I really meant it. Thank God for teenage daughters.

    I watched them leave, sighing with relief.

    “Next time,” she called.

    "Yeah!" You wish. Next time dear, if there is a next time, we’ll be better defended.

    “So, that’s who you fancied, was it?” I heard my son say.

    I looked at him.

    “What?”

    “She thought it was funny,” he said, wind blowing his hair, crossing the road. He laughed.

    “What? Who-what on Earth did you tell her? You come right back here! What did you say to her?”

    He laughed louder.

    It started raining.

    The following is another preview of 'The Coming of the Dark King':

    The sight that caught my eye, terrified the both of us. I froze. Asif, Diyafa, and Deffi all spun around, but they had barely turned their heads when their bodies began to solidify into black stone. Their faces remained mortified, stilled to the dark spell that bound them.

    The Dark King was holding a large, black, circular stone in his hand. He had waved it around, first at the Jade Queen, and then at all. The intensity of their assault had been too much for him.

    I was bitterly dismayed, for all around me, across the battlefield and on the walls of the Jade City, everyone had been crystallized where they stood. Those that had been in the sky also fell ill from the effects, and tumbled to the ground, hard as steel statues.

    No one had been spared, not even the Grim.

    I felt lonely.

    I remembered Fenn’s final words. She had foreseen this! Why-oh-why did we not heed her words?

    “It is the Dark King’s new weapon, the Dark Stone! Beware the Dark Stone!”

    The poor aarta! She had been sincere in all her warnings. Emerald she had been in her final moment. She saw this and tried to warn us; what a tragedy! How could I repair this now?

    The Jade City was defenseless.

    The Dark King snidely glanced around him, taking pleasure in the destruction he had caused. He reduced in size, believing himself to be alone, and made his way towards the Jade City gates.

    No one survived. I was alone to face the Dark King. Taking a deep breath, I braved the situation. After all, she was with me. I was Lisa, the Great Red Queen. If I did nothing, he would enter the Jade City, and defy its sanctity with his mere presence. He would tread on the territories of her allies to renew his evil strength.

    The nerve of him!

    I would not let him! Realizing that this could cost my life, I hurried along the walls, dodging behind the dark statues of an army that had been my allies. She was pleased with my speed. I saw the Dark King stop and leer at each statue, especially Wazira and Arusa.

    Oh, how our blood boiled! How dare he!

    The Dark King pushed over the young kildaan’s statue, and laughed derisively.

    The Great Red Queen struggled to contain her anger. She surfaced with all her intensity and moved swifter towards the gates.

    Abaddon must have sensed her, for he quickened his pace. She ran faster. From the corner of her eye, she saw his body gradually sink to the ground and deform with each stride. His grey skin gave way to dark fur that flickered like black fire. Soon he was running on all fours, bounding up the slope, and ramming all the statues that were in his path.

    Luckily, she didn’t see any damage, for that would seriously have made her meltdown!

    He quickened his pace. She ran faster. He was nearing the last slope as she curved around the last corner and closed in on the gates. She weaved through the stilled archers, just as his fat claws landed on the last slope. Finally, she was there; she didn’t hesitate.

    She opened fire, and blasted the beast with all her pent up fury.

    The Dark Beast shot through the air, crashing into a jutting rock that protruded out of a distant hillside. She saw the dark blood-spatter erode the stone.

    The Great Red Queen dared not sigh. She scowled fiercely, for she knew he would return. She had seen this before, and she did not like it. He was treacherous and vile, and she would kill him. She was determined.

    Sure enough, the Dark Beast returned at speed. She fired again, blasting him back into the jagged stone. Another spatter of dark blood confirmed a heavy injury. This did not satisfy her in the slightest. She needed to get at his weakness. The Keton Stone. So far, she hadn’t seen it. Abaddon hid it well.

    The Dark Beast roared in the distance.

    “Good! Vent your frustration. You haven’t seen anything yet. I will destroy you. The fires of Ithfiria will prevail today! Your Dark Stone could not harm me, and neither will your darkness. The rubies of Alenssa are as powerful today, as they were all those years ago when it was first bestowed to me.”

    The Dark Beast returned at speed.

    The Great Red Queen knew he would be expecting the same assault, and had probably adapted. She tried a different maneuver.

    She blasted his limbs.

    The Dark Beast fell flat on its ugly face, sliding on the ground as it came to a halt. She blasted it again and again, until two of its legs were torn to shreds.

    The Dark Beast groaned with agony.

    She hadn’t finished. She fired at its eyes, and inhaled its screams with a sense of satisfaction. It shook for a moment, and then it tried to get to its feet.

    Stunned, she saw his limbs repair themselves. She blasted him again with her ruby staff.

    His body fell into a ditch.

    This was an enemy she had faced before. He would rise again, and charge towards her.

    Her eyes shone brighter, peering for his shape as the evening dimmed some more. It would have satisfied her a great deal if this had been dawn of her beloved sun, but no, the vile had chosen a time that suited him.

    The inconsiderate selfish wretch! He would pay dearly for antagonizing her.

    The Dark Beast charged again, and this time she fired at his head, ripping off his horned ears as his body somersaulted over. She fired again, and threw him into another ditch.

    It occurred to her that the ditch had probably been filled with Rhiyssa before he came. The White Fire River had been destroyed by his mere arrival. How vile was he; that the blessed Shaara could dry up just by his presence? He was evil and wicked in every essence of his being. Damned he was, for eternity, damned from the day that he chose the dark ways. Damned he was for his plague, and the suffering he caused. He belonged with the devil that spawned him.

    She would send him there today.

    She blasted him again, as he charged towards her. The Dark Beast faltered, but this time he had absorbed her fire. He was adapting. Good. She would try a different strength. Joining the rubies from her necklace to her staff, by making them glimmer, she fired at its neck. She watched it jolt and shriek.

    Its body was thrown amongst the Grim, shattering a few statues in the process.

    “You may adapt King of Darkness, but I will meet you in every way.”

    The Dark Beast scrambled on to its taloned feet. It seemed a little smaller than what it looked like when she had started, but she knew of Abaddon’s treachery.

    She would not be misled so easily. She blasted the Beast by drawing her strength from the rubies on her crown.

    One of its limbs tore off. It fell flat, before rolling down the hill. From the dark blood-spatter arose acidic fumes, that cracked one of the Grim statues. It broke into four pieces.

    This appalled her. She wasn’t bothered about the Grim statues being destroyed, but if his blood was this destructive, what if he used it against the statues of her allies?

    She had to keep him away.

    The Dark Beast balanced on three legs. It seemed to mock her, by regenerating the fourth leg before her very eyes.

    She blasted it right off again. Not waiting for it to recover, she blasted two more. The Dark Beast will need to use a lot of energy to regenerate, she decided. This would come from its Keton Stone. A stone can only do so much, surely?

    Her question was answered after less than thirty seconds, when it again walked on all fours.

    Abaddon the Beast roared at her defiantly. She fired at his mouth. She fired again to break his jaw. Adjusting her source from the necklace to her ruby bracelet, she blasted his neck to inflict a pain to remember.

    Abaddon moaned and shrieked. Raising her left hand, she cried:

    “ELA DON KIFF!”

    Two fireballs shot out and set his body ablaze. The fire was brief, for it was subdued by his dark fur.

    She blasted its hind and its neck simultaneously. The Dark Beast staggered backward and fell on its side.

    “ELA DON KIFF!”

    Again, the flames were subdued within ten seconds.

    She fired a continuous beam to carve a deep incision. As the Dark Beast got up, its black insides fell out from underneath its body.

    This almost got her excited, until she saw them retract inside. The wound closed in on itself.

    She combined the rubies from her staff and crown, and blasted the wretch into another ditch.

    “Abaddon the Terrible, we can go all night! You shall not set foot into the Jade City, come what may!”

    She fired again, when he returned. This time he staggered, but did not fall. He was adapting.

    She combined the rubies from her bracelet and staff, and blasted him repetitively. Chunks of fur, flesh, and spatters of black blood filled the air. He landed on top of six Grim statues.

    He rose up again and charged. She fired a red beam, and brought it crashing down.

    “Eat dirt, you foul creature!”

    The Dark Beast got up and shook itself, spreading its pestilence in all directions.

    She fired, to throw it flat on its face.

    Abaddon the Beast got up on all fours, and charged her.

    She fired her red beam, but to her horror, it had no effect. She combined the rubies from her bracelet and crown, and sighed with relief when he fell backwards.

    He got up again, and charged towards her. This time, her efforts failed repeatedly.

    AEG Publishing 2009
    All rights reserved A B Shires.

  • Extract 2 from The Shipley Five, The Coming of the Dark King

    Hi all,

    Today was the sad day that Jade Goody died. May I offer my condolences to all of her family and friends. Cancer is a terrible disease, and having spent most of my life in hospital, on those wards, watching friends and relatives fade away, I know how difficult it is. It doesn't sadden me any less. My heart goes out to her children, as well as her mother, and her husband Jack Tweed. May they find solace in each other.

    Below is another extract from the forthcoming sequel to 'The Shipley Eye, The Eye of Osiris'. The Shipley Five books have been written for teens and adults alike. Based on the 'Djinn' concept, the unfolding intergalactic war of the Jenn threatens to consume Earth and the nine mystical Jenn worlds.

    'The Shipley Five, Eye of Osiris' is available via http://www.theshipleyfive.com/ or most website retailers. For ISBN information to order at your local bookstore, please visit the official website.

    Best Wishes

    A B Shires

    Extract Below

    The Shipley Five, The Coming of the Dark King

    From Chapter 9, Awaking the Queen:

    Soon they were inside the building, following the marching general down the long corridor, through the enormous hallway expanse under the dome, and toward a little door that Asif and Matthew remembered walking through not so long ago.

    They were heading for the Great Red Queen’s mausoleum.

    The general led them outside through another courtyard. Their hearts quickened when their eyes fell upon familiar architecture of carvings, wide pillars, and the large entrance doors. As they entered the mausoleum, they saw Ithrandir standing by the glass coffin, looking down adoringly at his sleeping queen.

    General Soahn retreated after seeing them through.

    “Ah, you’ve arrived at last!” said Arusa with relief, as she stepped out of the shadows.

    “You took your time,” said Muneeb. He stood up from his seated position.

    “Hello Shortstuff.”

    “Have you been waiting long?” asked Matthew.

    “We came the day before yesterday,” said Arusa. She walked toward the coffin.
    “Asif, where’s the crystal?”

    “Right here,” he said, pulling it out of his jacket.

    The crystal glowed brightly. It changed from green to blue, purple, red, and then luminous white, lighting the mausoleum from its dimly lit interior.

    “Woah!”

    Matthew whistled when he saw how the clean, marble floor sparkled.

    “Welcome Kildana,” said Ithrandir, looking up as they neared the coffin.

    He walked around the coffin, bowing his head briefly before kneeling to hug Asif and Matthew.

    “Welcome, father to Muneeb and Asif. Welcome, mother to Matthew,” he said gently, respectfully lowering his head towards both Haroon and Stephanie, and then standing tall.

    “Hello,” they replied, awed at his size.

    “The Jade Queen has informed me that you are able to resurrect the Great Red Queen?” Ithrandir said, turning to Asif.

    He was puzzled.

    “Yes. Well, not really. She doesn’t need resurrecting, because she’s not dead,” Asif said earnestly. He hoped he was right about this.

    “Well, you seem to be right about one thing,” Ithrandir said.

    He looked at them with a strange look.

    “Her wounds have disappeared.”

    “They have?”

    They gathered round. I lay on a red sheet covered in layers of white silk. My face and chest were lifeless, although they didn’t know I was dreaming of a barbecue in the back garden of my old home. My brother Tom had opened a bottle of beer, before I plunged into darkness. I never told them that I had been weeks away from a full recovery. The Great Red Queen’s rubies would have allowed me to re-enter my body when her powers were fully restored.

    The mausoleum grew quiet for a moment.

    “She knows you’re here,” Arusa gasped suddenly, with a tear in her eye. She looked up at Asif.

    “Go on then, Asif,” urged Matthew, moving aside, “Do what you have to do.”

    Asif neared the head of the coffin and remembered the image that I had sent him. It had taken all of my effort to locate him with my ruby stones, depleting any chance of a quick recovery just to ensure he got the message. The whispered words, still fresh, sent a shiver down his spine.

    “Save me. You have the eye, near the crystal, the ruby. You know you can.”

    “Can you lift the glass case?” he said, looking at Ithrandir.

    The Keeper of the City obliged, with the help of Haroon and Matthew. They took the glass case towards a stone pillar and placed it on the ground.

    “Are we ready then?” Asif asked nervously.

    “Aye!” replied Muneeb excitedly, with eyes equally animated.

    Everyone stared at Asif in anticipation.

    Asif lowered the crystal towards the crown jewels, touching the rubies one by one. When the crystal touched the largest ruby, the ruby glowed and my body jolted.

    It must have frightened the hell out of them, for they all stepped back, wide-eyed. For me, it was like travelling through a long red tunnel at high speed for a split second. My heartbeat reverberated, awakening my limbs.

    “Do it again!” I heard Matthew say.

    Asif lowered his hand slowly, touching the red ruby and keeping the crystal pressed. He felt the hairs on the back of his neck prick upward, and a cold shiver run down his back.

    I quivered lightly. My throat was extremely dry and sore, when my chest expanded to fill with air. Then pain rippled through me like a current, forcing me to heave a gasp. It lasted mere seconds and was followed by pins and needles. Bless my rubies for completing their purpose to heal me!

    I opened my eyes, noticing the white ceiling before becoming aware I wasn’t alone. They looked astonished, even though this was what they had expected. For a moment, they were silent.

    I was surprised to see Mr. Din and Aunt Stephanie. Matthew stood by her side. The last time I had seen her, she had been in hospital looking pale and tired. Now, she stood on her feet looking older, but healthier. I was relieved to see them both.

    She had tears in her eyes. They all had tears in their eyes.

    “Well, a right sorry looking lot you are,” I said, glancing at them one by one.

    Matthew chuckled poignantly, leaning forward to help me sit up. He hugged me tightly, sobbing and laughing at the same time. I was bewildered by his feelings, but even more so when Arusa and Aunt Stephanie cried and hugged me too. Even Muneeb was emotional when his turn came.

    “I wasn’t dead you know,” I said sniffling.

    Mr. Din came forward.

    “I’m so glad, you’re okay, Lisa. Your father would have been really happy to see you,” he said..

    I nodded silently, remembering the last time I had spoken with Dad. My throat tightened. I had many questions to ask, but I put them aside for another time.

    Asif greeted me with kind words and helped me stand. My legs ached and were stiff, until the queen’s stones shone ever brighter. I felt better within seconds. It was then that I saw him, standing forlorn with his red gaze unshifting; the one who had been constant in my dreams, sharing his kindness and love.

    The images of what had occurred came flooding back. The reality sank in, dismally tainting my illusion. Disappointed, I smiled at him nervously, but the look he returned melted my heart. I found myself walking towards him, growing to match his size. She wanted to surface, yet I refused to relent, keeping my grief and emotions intact to address him.

    “Ithrandir . . . I . . . how have you been?”

    I was aware they were watching from behind when he leaned forward to kiss me. I didn’t care. I needed his warmth to reaffirm his presence. He pulled me closer and I found myself crying. It was a moment, which I never thought I would experience. Greva had sunk his wretched teeth into me, within the safe confines of this wonderful city. I listened to his heartfelt whispers, crying when his words were spoken hoarsely. He hugged me and I hugged him back. Turning around, I saw Arusa with tears in her eyes standing beside my cousin. I braved a smile, for their silent stares were meaningful.

    It was a while before we made our way to the domed hallway.

    The next day, my friends parted from the City of Ithfir, after staying as honorable guests in the adjoining suite to the royal chambers, courtesy of Ithrandir, the Keeper of the City.

    The evening had been merry, and the citizens flocked to the Royal Dome upon hearing the news about their beloved Great Red Queen’s revival. Visitors arrived from both the Blue City of Lemoff and the Jade City of Aran Daran to pay homage. I was their divine mother, their symbol of strength and power. So, I spent the evening allowing her to take control to address certain guests. It was strange looking at my friends mingle. They looked juvenile and petite compared to how I felt. Regardless, I was pleased they were with me, showing their boundless solidarity in full view of the Ithfirians. I guess, I felt more connected to them at that moment than I had ever been.

    The boys were relieved to see familiar faces among the visitors. Aifa and Mafius came from Lemoff with an Azuran warrior called Akab. Taash the Jade, Nethrin, Faash, and Ophelia came with gifts from the Jade City. They greeted us with sincere affection before politely introducing themselves to Haroon and Aunt Stephanie. Muneeb was overjoyed to see Nethrin, and remained at his side for the better part of the evening.

    “The Jenn have reached far and wide since the dawn of time. Many fled their worlds at the time of the Great Revolt. I’m not surprised that Earth has its own High Council,” shouted Faash to the boys a little later.

    The sound of merriment was loud. He had listened intently when they had described their homecoming.

    “You say you were only away for two days, yet five years have passed by. Ayla forbid if you stayed longer. The Vinx has been quite troublesome lately.”

    “Yes, we heard,” shouted Matthew, raising his glass of Krill. He drank the contents of the glass in one go, before recounting what Arusa had told him about the sirens in Nab Wood.

    Moments later, Faash turned his head to Asif, and spoke loudly in his ear. “There is one who has sorely missed your absence. Her gaze is upon you now.”

    Asif looked around in surprise, noticing Taash watching him from a distance. She was half listening to a joyful Ithfirian dignitary, who was engaged in a three-way conversation.

    She flashed a smile, which made his heart beat erratically.

    “If you should excuse me,” he mumbled, standing up from his chair.

    He nervously made his way towards her.

    Matthew rolled his eyes, and Muneeb laughed.

    Meanwhile, I was having a different kind of conversation with Arusa, as we sat side by side at the head of the hall. At first, we reminisced on our times together until she turned her head away from the crowd, and lowered her voice.

    “To be honest, I’m regretting I picked up this bracelet. I don’t know how they expect me to help them, when I still don’t understand half of it. Maybe, I’m not right for it. Then there’s that horrible bitch! She looked at me, as if she knew that I knew that I was no match for her. She scared the hell out of me! Selwa nearly killed me. Do you think I can give it to someone else?”

    Her look told me it was bothering her. Putting aside my own troubles, I thought about her words.

    “I don’t think you can do that,” I said, remembering what I had been told of her emeralds.

    Two citizens walked past and bowed with smiles. I smiled back and waited until they had moved on.

    “The emeralds are a part of you now, and their legacy is yours. You shouldn’t be scared of her. Think this over differently, Arusa. You survived to face her on another day. A day you’ll either teach her a lesson, or kill her. There’s no two ways about it. You’re the Jade Queen, regardless of your previous life. You have a chance to make a difference for these people, as well as yourself. I know it’s hard, since you haven’t got your predecessor to help you out, unlike me. She just butts in when she thinks I can’t handle it, which is alright sometimes, but other times I have to struggle. I think you've done really well, considering what you used to be like with Carla Robinson. Do you remember?”

    She looked at me as if I had disturbed a memory she wanted kept forgotten. I thought it was amazing how times had changed. Despite being the best of friends and the fact she had hadn’t aged since the last time I had seen her, she looked different.

    I smiled despite the heavy migraine.

    “We’re gonna’ be okay, Arusa.”

    “I don’t know,” she said.

    “Now you listen to me, Arusa,” I said quite annoyed, “The last thing you should feel is insecurity. Even the slightest could kill you. Selwa will eat you alive. Your enemy is fast becoming the greatest nightmare this side of the universe, and I am not just talking about you. The people around you, the people on Earth, the ones who depend on you, and the ones you are supposed to protect will pay the full price if you can’t get your act together. She’s the serpent from hell. You have to outsmart her at all times. You need to know her next move before she knows it herself. Do I make myself clear?”

    She looked at me, speechless.

    “Now, I know that picking up all there is to know will be slow, but you will get there. It’s your only weakness, just remember that, and don’t show it. I’m gonna’ help you as much as I can, since we’re in this together. The Great Red Queen is determined,” I said. I couldn’t believe I had said all that. Imparting wise words to the Queen of the Jades of all people? And it hadn’t even come from the divine mother.

    It felt good.

    She smiled. “Thanks.” She paused. “Talking about your alternate ego, Asif wondered how you would cope with your private time.”

    “What do you mean?”

    “You know . . . the two of you in one body . . . like romance, and all that entails.” She looked away.

    “Asif’s got a dirty mind,” I said, irritated and loud.

  • Extract from The Shipley Five, The Coming of the Dark King

    Hi all,

    Over the next few days I will be releasing an extract each day from the forthcoming book 'The Shipley Five, The Coming of the Dark King' which is the immediate sequel to 'The Shipley Five, Eye of Osiris'.

    The Shipley Five books have been written for teens and adults alike. The content and storyline will become darker with each sequel, so I hope to appeal to readers from all backgrounds.

    In the Shipley Five’s first adventure, Muneeb found a crystal at the bottom of the Din family garden, which transported him, his brother, his sister and two friends to a Hallway of Worlds. There, they found magical weapons, a Food Tree, and a water carrier that refilled itself with the twist of its cap. Armed with their finds, they entered a dark world plagued by the Damned. A war broke out, uniting the evil lords of the north to the west. Unfortunately, Lisa, who had become the Great Red Queen, was attacked by the Dark Lord Greva in the confines of her Royal Dome. The children returned to Earth without her, believing her dead. But, when they arrived home, Matthew’s father told them that her predecessor had healed herself.

    Asif recalled Lisa’s final words . . . to near the Eye of Osiris to her rubies! The Eye of Osiris was a magic crystal known to have an infinite power source, which the children believed would restore Lisa’s lifestones. Asif, Matthew, Arusa, and Muneeb want to save Lisa before the dreaded Siren Queen makes her move. Yet, from the moment they step foot again on the Jenn world, they learn of a terrible threat.

    For the majority of Matthew’s life, it was assumed that Richard Banks had been killed in action by a roadside bomb. His body had never been found, but in the last chapter of “Eye of Osiris,” we learned that he had survived. Richard experienced the ancient war where he fought alongside General Lebo, a hero revered by all the Osirions.

    In the “Coming of the Dark King,” the Shipley Five learn the magnitude of Richard’s contribution to Osiris. New characters spring to life, some who will have more significance than others. The War of the Jenn has a wider impact, one that threatens Earth too. The Eye of Osiris crystal will take a back seat for this story, as the Osirion Alliance come to terms with their new danger, and rise to confront their worst fears.

    For those who are not familiar with the Daraan, the Ithfirians, the Azura, or the Jades, it is recommended that you read the Shipley Five’s confrontation with Lord Greva, in the book called the “Eye of Osiris.”

    But if you want a peek on the sequel, keep reading. I have taken the extract from one of the chapters when the Osirion Alliance are experiencing Matthew's father's memories of an ancient war, and his experiences with the legendary, hero, and saviour General Lebo.

    From Chapters 15-16:

    The Darian King was talking to General Lebo, while they waited for the Elijans to near them.

    “It appears you were wise to let the Delyans leave on their ship, Lebo. I really thought Altas was a coward, but the Damned attacked before dawn. They left no survivors!”

    He shook his head with a sigh.

    “If only I’d been as cautious; so many lives would have been saved!”

    “You were not to know, Maje.”

    “Yes, there was a lot I was not to know, Lebo. I should have heeded my mother with her words of kindness, and taken the Jade path in my youth. Perhaps it would have helped lead my people with better decisions, decisions which might have saved Delfar and Emicus. Instead, I wiled it away with acts of chivalry and self-righteousness. What folly it all seems now, how incredibly reckless.”

    He looked at the general with a sad, yet respectful glance.

    “I failed to hear you when the moment was right. You always seem to know General; you give shrewd advice that even outsmarts our esteemed elders. Wise are your decisions, even at the worst of times. The Daraan are lucky to have you, and Osiris is lucky to have you as our advisor, our leader, and our comforter! Blessed was the day when you were born, for your achievements have hindered the advance of the Damned as if Ayla himself sent you.”

    The general glanced tiredly at King Defra.

    “I am a Jade,” he said quietly.

    “That you are!” said King Defra. He inhaled and exhaled deeply. “That you are! A path for the wise and learned, a path for the gracious and gentle. You are the finest of them all.”

    They watched from a raised hill. The long line of Elijans, with their white, flowing hair and long, white gowns, filed past carrying very few belongings. Their pupils sometimes were barely discernible, except for their white glimmer. Other times, they were glowing in vibrant colors.

    Graceful and silently, they made little sound in the evening light.

    Defra’s animal moved forward to the edge.

    “Elijan Maje! Elijan Aarta!” shouted the king with the height of his voice. He raised his arms with his palms outstretched. “I ask of you, I implore you, do not abandon us to our darkest hour. You are our elders, wise and learned. Glory of the Jenn; leave us not at this moment of need. As King of Daraan, I implore you! The Dark King arrives within days, and we hold little hope without you.”

    Amazingly, the Elijans stopped in unison, turning smoothly to face him as if all of them were joined together. Their response surprised even the Darian King.

    “Salam ye Ishak, King Defra the Brave, son of Dahood of Delwar and Desra the Jade, ” they echoed as one voice. “We are no more the Elijans, the esteemed of the Jenn who failed at the hour of the Dark One, and failed at the rise of the Dark King. We have rejected the Elijan King, though he is welcome in the fold of the Eli. Praise be to Ayla, for the decision we made is a decision to last. The paths are clear for all to see; damnation or redemption. We are the repented, pledging to seek the path to redemption. Holy are the Eli! Your material concerns are no longer ours. We leave you our weapons, protected from the Dark King’s curse. With the touch of your hand, you will be learned. We head for the Great White City where hallowed will the Eli. Come with us, you are welcome, though fear of the Dark One cannot be prevented.”
    And with that, the Eli turned back to the direction they were traveling and continued their journey.

    Richard was astounded. He chuckled with amusement, yet felt the disappointment of not being able to stop the migration. He’d seen the Elijans battle many times, and was surprised at how effective they were on each occasion. They were the greatest asset to their war strategy. To suddenly lose the ace up their sleeves may have caused panic and a possible surrender if it had been a war on Earth. Yet, the Jenn stood firm in their unified resolve, feeling the bitter setback, but taking strength from General Lebo’s presence.

    They had to face the Dark King, the Vinx, and the Damned, lest the demise of all!

    The king suddenly noticed someone who was known to his royal court.

    “And you Wiffron? Will you desert us too?” he bellowed.

    A youthful Elijan turned sadly to face the King.

    “Material matters matter no more. I have embraced the path of the Eli,” he said, lowering his gaze.

    “Material matters?” echoed the king angrily, with grief in his eyes. He vented his frustration. “What is left to be material? My kingdom is barren, and my people ruined! What is ‘material’? I have naught but the sword in my hand and my faithful steed! What is ‘material’? Do you condemn me, Wiffron? Do you condemn us all? For we would still rise to defend you!”

    Wiffron looked back at the king with tearful eyes, but continued to follow his people along the long road to the White City.

    Suddenly, a tall, young Elijan, of similar age to Wiffron, broke away from his path and clambered up the steep slope with long strides of his long legs. He approached the king, and the Eli abruptly turned their heads, robotically, casting a glance before continuing their journey.

    The Elijan’s hair was as white as snow, and his skin as soft as an infant. His eyes, surprisingly, were as green as Olwyn’s and Lebo’s, glowing just the same.

    “I will fight by your side, King Defra. My name is Wazira, and there are more like me who will remain to assist you, some in battle and others for your cause. But, do not raise your hopes, for they wish to join the path to redemption as soon as it is possible.”

    Defra gasped with relief. Richard, Oleena, and the general were elated.

    “Thank you, Wazira. Pray tell me, how many Elijans will remain with us?”

    “Less than a thousand,” replied the young Wazira, with emerald eyes that glimmered.

    “Oh, by the glory of God!” cried the King with relief.

    “Thank you, Wazira,” said General Lebo, offering to take his hand to shake it. But, Wazira stepped forward and kissed it, touching it to his forehead.

    “It is my honor to stand before thee, General,” he said reverently. “It is said that your heart is as pure as the first Jenn created. I know that to be true now. May Ayla protect and watch you.”

    “And you, Wazira,” replied the general, with a tired smile. “Come! We head back for the cave where we have much to discuss. Join us, Wazira, and bring my new recruits. There is food enough for all.”

    The mithrin pulled away, and Richard followed the general, with Oleena embracing him tightly from behind.

    Two days later, Richard entered the Jade City’s Oval Hall with General Lebo for a distressing task. It was a moment of turmoil for the general, who had tried hard to avoid it. They walked briskly to the far end, where the Jade Queen stood staring at a painting on the wall. Her long, green dress flowed to the ground, and her figure was just as elegantly poised; slim, and slender as a graceful princess Richard had once seen in his duties. Though Olwyn was by no means timid, she was a Jade Queen.

    She turned to face them with mournful eyes as they crossed the center. Her greeting was directed to the general:

    “Murffa Maje, it is good to see you. Do you come to share some of your burden?”

    General Lebo halted.

    “You know what I come to ask of you?” he asked edgily, with a deep frown about to break.

    Her answer came swiftly, biting the air.

    “Know that I will give it gladly!”

    He choked on hearing her response, and his steps faltered with a violent tremor. The Jade Queen hurried towards him, but he fell to his knees before her, sobbing tearfully.

    “Eh aarta . . . yee fi ray Jade Ferani,” his voice breaking, overcome with grief.

    He struggled to speak to her with each uncontrollable sob.

    “My Queen! My dearest Neroon! Know that I would give my life for you. Know that I resent it! I would give my life without a second’s thought. Yee fi ray Jade Ferani. I have searched for another way. Yee fi ray aarta! Ray ji aarta! Wretched is she! She demands it. Yee fi ray Jade Ferani . . . ray ji aarta! It pains me so, to ask you this!”

    Richard felt deeply saddened to see the general tormented. The queen crouched down, wrapping her arms around him. She spoke gently to ease his burden.

    “You are my brother, Lebo, as sure as the green sun gives life to the Jade. You have protected me and served me best in all my years. Had you asked me as my brother, I would still say yes. Asking me as my trusted general, protector and Herald of the Jade, there is only one right answer. Heed this; I have known of this burden for quite some time, though you dared not face it, and of your son as well as your loss. You are my maje, and you have searched all that you can, but you have found not what you desire. Your heart weeps as you are torn asunder, though you can comfort now. I am Olwyn, your sister; remember me who shared your youthful years? Our father and mother considered themselves blessed with you as their son, as I feel right now in your presence.”

    “Am fim neffi... yee fi ray aarta,” General Lebo sobbed.

    “As Jade Queen, it is my duty to protect my people to the best of my ability. The vile infliction that threatens the Daraan threatens all. Bold decisions have to be made, and sacrifices given, so that others may cherish the freedoms of tomorrow, free from damnation and free from the curse that binds us.’

    The general heaved uncontrollably, holding his younger sister, whom he had failed to protect.

    “Olwyn, this debt torments my soul. Forgive me Aarta, forgive me for what I ask of you!” he cried, his voice shaking enormously.

    “You ask me not, ray effreena maje! It is my duty!”

    She kissed his forehead, and held him close.

    It was awhile before the general recovered from the grief.

    Richard waited patiently, feeling sorrowful and wishing there was anything he could do to help them. But, the burden was theirs alone. Richard knew that General Lebo had spent a long time searching for an alternative, up until the night before the Dark King’s return. He finally accepted there was none. The distress had left him deeply anguished, although now the emotions were surfacing exactly where they should be.

    In the arms of his sister.

    The memory changed to the next day. The drums beat to a haunting rhythm, much louder than the ones he faced with the centurion.

    Richard’s heart beat fearfully, though he tried to convince himself that he had seen it all before. But fear was rife in the ranks, he could tell just by a mere glance in all directions.

    The long lines of the damned faced them with menacing looks, holding their crude and brutal weapons with the look of death. It wasn’t the Damned that they feared but their wicked master.

    The Dark King.

    And then he came. The sound of him arriving, towering over the hills with his extended size caused sheer terror and panic.

    The dreaded moment had finally arrived.

    Chapter 16

    A TALE OF THE PAST IV

    The sight of the king, when he arrived, had sent a tremor of fear throughout the ranks. It grew until General Lebo, Richard, and the two kings rode from one end of their sections to the other, yelling boldly with encouraging words. It took nearly an hour of courageous shouting with help from the commanders to calm their battalions.

    Richard wasn’t sure if his words were enough, except to remind them that the Osirion Alliance had General Lebo to lead them. That quickly brought a cheer from the soldiers.

    Merwyff neighed, adjusting her hooves. The anxiety was felt by all, especially the animals.
    General Lebo had chosen their heightened position because it looked outward, and exposed at least twenty gildard to the north and west.

    Richard sat with the cavalry, and stared at the enormous army of the Damned, grey and dark, with their vile beasts and burning yellow torches. They stared back, as if hell had let them loose for the day.

    The bitter cold that they’d brought with them reminded Richard of a mission that soured in Bosnia. Their mere presence sucked the life out of plants and gentle creatures, bringing to ruin an area that had once been prosperous and thick with flowers, fruit, birds, and insects. Who knew how many countless species had been wiped out with their arrival?

    The two queens, distances apart, were waiting patiently for the moment that their strength would be tested.

    The Vinx arrived with the largest section of the Damned, isolating the route to the City of Rozen. Since her defeat near Rozen, her size had grown tenfold. Although, from Richard’s distant position, she looked smaller than his fingernail.

    The Dark King was gigantic! His large eyes were empty, with only darkness filling the space between his eyelids. His skin was scaly grey, with protruding black veins that pumped the curse into all of his organs. His hair had solidified into dark black crystals that were rumored destructive enough to burn through the ground and dry up the Shaara.

    Towering with all his vile, as if Osiris was insufficient to hold his stance, he stared menacingly at General Lebo and the two kings that dared to defy him.

    The three armies were spread densely over a wide expanse that covered over fifty gildard north to south. The Great Red Queen and the Daraan covered the south, spreading over the plains into both Valley of the Three Points and the Valley of the Devils. The Feroshans, the Lemothinians, and the Roshans defended the territories around the City of Lemoff.

    The remnants of the Elijans had spread themselves thinly throughout the southern wall of General Lebo’s army.

    The moment was afoot; the great battle was nigh.

    Richard now fully understood the Osirions’ tension. He understood why the general had worked tirelessly for all the pieces to be put together, why the Daraan were filled with anxiety, why the Jades had religiously trained the warriors and organized a lavish supply of food for this day. He understood why the Feroshans had been so critical of the Scimitaff, and had ultimately brought about its demise, why the Ithfirians had put away their lavish instruments of merriment to pick up weapons of steel, why the Elijan King had abandoned his ways and forsaken his people to conspire in a daring scheme with the general. He understood why all had placed their endless faith in the great man, General Lebo, who would lead them in this dreadful hour.

    This enemy was more terrifying than anything Richard had ever seen. Even if they destroyed his army, the Dark King looked like the epitome of the devil. Fearing the sight of him, Richard focused his thoughts on his one true love, the one that could see him through this darkness.

    “Oleena,” he whispered, and repeated her name until his nerves were settled. He wondered if he’d survive to see her again, and regretted not telling her how much he loved her.

    “I know you love me Richard. Know that I love you too!”

    He looked around, surprised, and saw her smiling from some distance away, in the company of a battalion of Ruby Warriors.

    “Live through this day for me, I need you to!”

    He worried for her now, for she carried his child. “She shouldn’t be here,” was his deepest thought, though he braved a poignant smile. He had discussed this with her, and yet she hadn’t relented. He looked away, deeply troubled, seeing all but seeing none. The comforting words spoken next brought him to his senses.

    “Are you with me, Maje?”

    Richard turned his head to his left, and saw the stern look from General Lebo. He was clean-shaven now, thanks to Queen Thirya’s constant harassment. After three visits from the pretty, red-haired cousin, he’d succumbed to her demands, albeit for the amusement of the commanders.

    The clean-shaven, combed, and groomed look suited him.

    “To the end!” he replied with a hardened glare, gripping his sword.

    They waited for what seemed like hours, staring at their enemy with dread, anticipation, and anxious determination, listening to the encouraging speeches from their commanders. The heat from all three suns increased their tension, despite being subdued with the mere presence of the Dark King. A few times, there were cries that declared the battle was afoot, but General Lebo and the two kings signaled for their patience.

    The red sun began to descend, and Richard was sure the Great Red Queen would be frowning. She’d made it clear that battling under the crimson sun was preferred if her peak strength was required. Thirya was somewhere at the top of a hill, watching over the vast expanse between the mountains and the distant head of the Dark King.

    The Jade queen was nearby, though Richard couldn’t see her. It was just as well. Richard dared not watch her. He knew what was expected.

    Suddenly, all fell silent from the direction of the Damned. General Lebo raised his hand, and silence ushered from their side. Richard could feel the apprehension and heightened tension spreading to the valleys, the straight plains, and the Venn Varda. He wondered how many remained at the Vedaffy Pass, knowing fully that they’d be deep within enemy territory. Such bravery was commendable!

    There was a chorus of gasps from behind him, so Richard looked up and saw that the Dark King was transforming into a hideous beast with gigantic, thin, black teeth that extended until they pulled his mouth apart. His skin melted to give way to dark fur that stood on end and flickered like black fire. The dark crystallite receded slightly, to give way to horned ears that extended. His eyes grew until they encompassed the upper part of his head, protruding darkly, as black as the abyss at the depths of space. They stuck out like dark spheres, while his feet grew thick with sharp claws that could rip out the even the hardest mountain rock without effort.

    The Dark King was a hideous beast. It stared at them with all of its wickedness!

    And then it roared, shaking the ground tremendously with its horrifying sound.

    The mithrin neighed with fright, some collapsing under the strain and some bolting away. Everyone crouched forward, covering their ears, waiting for the sound to die down, and praying to the Almighty to see them through their terror.

    It lasted a minute, but felt like ten.

    General Lebo gave the order.

    “AAAAAARTA LEEYAN OSIRIS —BADAA!”

    A huge column of Jades, Ruby Warriors, and Azura, who were part of the Osirion Sisters Fellowship, took to the air, firing relentlessly with all their might at the Dark Beast. Another column arose from some distance away, to take on the Vinx.

    The Beast leaped forward, severing three with its teeth before they fell to the ground, where the darkness took them.

    They arose within minutes, deformed with scaly skin and talons, and growling with pain from their transformation. Two Jade arrows of intense, green, cold fire slammed into the nearest siren, and Azura arrows hit the other two.

    The Ruby Warriors retaliated against the Dark Beast, aiming for its eyes with both arrows and red fireballs, and causing some injury to both. Jade fireballs tore off chunks off its hide and severed one claw. The Azura aimed for its mouth, breaking a few teeth and causing some internal damage. Disappointingly, the claw grew back and the injuries recovered, with the exception of one eye, with which the Beast struggled painfully.

    The noise was deafening.

    The Jades spun in their dozens, firing volley after volley, only to injure it temporarily. The injuries repaired themselves each time. So, Lenwa the Ruby Elder, who was the fiercest, fired so fast that her arms were invisible to the human eye. Her intention was clear to Richard; she wanted to hinder the Beast’s recovery. Lenwa was joined by three Elijans whose streaks of white light shattered pieces of the black crystallite that covered the top of its head. The shards sank into the ground, sending up a plume of noxious fumes.

    The Beast roared angrily at the Elijans, retreated two steps back, and then leaped forward with a swipe of its claw. It struck two, who were clumsy enough to follow inward.

    Richard stared with dismay as they fell down. The Elijans cried with pain as the shadows grew within, though their friends tried hard to retrieve them.

    The Dark Beast placed its claw over both victims, and roared defiantly, facing off the challengers. The noise was deafening, forcing the challengers to briefly retreat.

    Thirty Elijans joined in the assault. The resulting firepower, from the Osirion Sisters Fellowship and the Elijans, could not dislodge their nemesis.

    The fallen Elijans turned into gigantic deformations of their former selves.

    The Beast shoved them away with its claw and stared mockingly, baring its black, icicle-like teeth. Black drool oozed onto the ground, melting the earth.

    The deformations stood up briefly, before a hail of green arrows and white light struck them down permanently.

    Fifty more Elijans arrived, opening fire with a hail of white light. Their long, ghostly figures were focused with sheer determination. Speed and skill fought against the Beast, and defended their kin from its clutches.

    White light, and green and red fire, began to take its toll.

    The Dark Beast reluctantly and hastily retreated for the cover of the mountains, where the Great Red Queen began her ferocious assault. The thud from each bound, and its cries of pain became distant.

    The Osirion Sisters Fellowship and the Elijans followed together. The distant explosions were deep. Every now and then, a red, blue, white, or a green flash lit up the mountains for a brief second. Then, a huge boom followed, shaking the ground.

    Merwyff neighed gently, so Richard patted her head, whispering comforting words to ease her tension. From his position, he could see that the battle was raging just as fiercely from where the Vinx was positioned.

    General Lebo sent a commander of the cavalry to take a closer look, daring not to wander too far in case events took an unexpected turn in his absence.

    Richard wondered when it would be before he could engage with the Damned. Staring at their ugly faces for hours was not what he’d envisaged. He could see them from where he sat, and they glared back at him with all of their menace, but this was a war that would be fought on different levels. Their turn would come when the Dark King or General Lebo permitted it.

    He turned his attention instead to discussing strategies with the maje.

    The battle raged for hours with the Dark Beast, although not as intensely after the Vinx advanced. Flashes of color from the horizon, and the numerous wounded Jenn returning, filled the hours.

    Richard busied himself assisting wherever he was needed.

    There were wounded to tend to, food to distribute, weapons to sharpen, and mithrin to be cared for.

    The Osirion Sisters Fellowship bade goodbye, braving the inevitable with taut faces and looks of determination. Some dared not look at their loved ones, as they headed for the skies in both directions. The maje of the Feroshan Elite followed, although many battalions remained for the greater battle to follow.

    “They say you faced him on Keffi, and killed him?” Richard said later, standing with the general on the withering grass. He’d been listening to the Jades chat, but he didn’t know what to believe. The Dark King was here, alive, and destructive. How could he be dead?

    He supped the ration of hot soup handed to him by a maje. The warmth was a comforting relief from the cold that had arrived with the Damned. With the retreat of the Dark King, everyone suddenly felt the cold.

    The general inhaled, frowning on a terrible memory that resurfaced. He stared at his own bowl, feeling a loss of appetite.

    “He cannot be killed,” he replied grimly, gazing distantly through the corner of his eyes for a moment, as if relaying a reply.

    The mountains rumbled and shook. The general looked down forlorn, as if someone he’d known had fallen prey to the might of the Dark Beast.

    It was a few minutes before he spoke again.

    “I killed him on holy ground,” he said quietly, with a remorseful look. “I severed his head from his shoulders and distanced them by many gildard. A great many people died to achieve this, and though we were cautious, by evening his head was gone. By dawn the next day, he had risen with tenfold his might. By nightfall, all of Keffi was ruined. Those that survived were those that fled. Such is the curse of the Dark King.”

    Richard was slightly shocked. So it was true! The Dark King had been killed, and came back alive!

    He stared at the general, sensing the general’s despair and sadness. He speculated on the people he had faced in his own lifetime. They had been the scum of the Earth, and everyone was better off without them. He shook his head gently. It was terrible. The general had fought hard and killed his worst enemy with his own bare hands and sword, and then witnessed this foe come alive again. All those people that had died, what hope did they have today?

    General Lebo spoke softly, as if he’d heard Richard’s thoughts.

    “Abaddon is terrible, there is no doubt. Though, there will come a time when even his strength will fail, a time of demise, despair, and yet a time with a glimmer of hope. Evil is the path he has taken, and evil will be the course that takes him. Today we can only postpone the inevitable, to give ourselves a chance to save ourselves and our tomorrows.”

    The hillsides were shaken with a loud roar.

  • My second book is finished at last!

    Writing my second book was not as hard to write, but to get it right. There were many changes that I had to make to the first book, post completion, which I wanted to avoid. You see, I find it easy to concentrate on getting the flow of the story right, but it is noticing the detail which takes all of my time; such as spelling variations and layout.

    This time I noted what I wanted to look out for, and I was prepared. At least, I thought I was prepared. Opening the edited version, I found it filled with red track changes. To begin with, I wasn't even bothered with the corrections, grammatical changes etc - after all, that is what you pay an editor to do! But then, as I went half way through my manuscript and I found a recommendation here, a recommendation or a comment there, I could see why it is easy for writers to fall out with their editors. A story is our creation, our effort, and to have suggestions for improvement in red font slotted into your 'baby' kind of reminds you of school days when you open you exercise book to find the lovely kindly spoken teacher does not share your perspective of hard work. The main thing is to keep it cool. Think about what the editor is trying to do for you. They are experienced in getting the structure perfect for readers. They have probably edited hundreds of manuscripts before they reach yours, so they will know when something is not quite right in the structure. Then again, there are times when you may have to hold your ground, i.e if you have planted a detail that may be regarded as a seed to be used in a sequel.

    I found myself thinking over what had been suggested, despite the overall success of what I thought I had put in the book. Before long, I had made changes which then took me another four months to complete. On hindsight, I can say now say that I am happy with the sequel to 'The Shipley Five, Eye of Osiris'. 'The Coming of the Dark King' now has a stronger plot which will help the next book. It has a'hot and cold' relationship between the characters, and the narration is provided by one of the main characters.

    As for whether the changes are better, who knows? Only time will tell.

    A B Shires
    The Shipley Five Books
    http://www.theshipleyfive.com/

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